Hi Bob,
Great, it goes back to intro with DS al Coda.
Well, but I still have problem with it, caused by where Fine is to be.
The theme part is actually the same structure as the main part AABA.
So, let me call the theme part A'A'B'A' (8+8+4+8 bars).
Yours plays like A'A'B'-Fine at the last chorus, but I want A'A'B'A'-Fine.
So the Fine should logically be placed at bar #16 N.C E-9 (or maybe #17 E-6 N.C.).
But if the Fine is at bar #16, the last chorus becomes only A'-Fine, not A'A'B'A'-Fine... :-(
Mmm...