Thanks for this, Saxologi!
This song was already in the standards list on the app, but it could use some improvement, and you have done so.
I think some elements of both could be combined though. The original version has a simpler structure, but the timing is correct on yours. The fourth chord should, I think, be G7 not G6 in each verse. But I like your Gsharp6 better than the Adim from the older version.